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Question: Do you remember yesterday when you said good-bye!? (Poem)
"Yesterdays Good-byes"

Dew drenched delicate petals lofted by the wind,
blown away, they escape my vision yet again,
Footsteps once leading up to my front door,
are washed away by rains of the night before!.

Sun winking through branches of Georgia pines,
brightening my house through cracks in my blinds!.
Birds singing diverse songs thank the new day,
from nowhere, past my window, they frolic and play!.

comforted by pillow and crumpled cotton sheets,
wandering through images the subconscious creates,
Dreams, destinations, journeys defying logic,
A bevy of multi-rated off the wall topics!.

Sheets not so clean spread underneath my body,
Your aroma covers them from when you were naughty,
My mind wanders everywhere that my body lies,
while I think of yesterday when we said our good-byes!.

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Thats it, I'm swooning and you can't stop me! As well as my emotional reaction to this poem, sir, it appeals to all my senses and makes me want to clap wildly and say Bravo!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You know BOB that poets can make up things to look real!.But this poem has (originality) that could be felt (subconsciously)!. Some how I read it w/ Ur heart-beat and fast breathing was there from the 1st letter to the last 1!.True feelings R talking there Bob, lots of them, and Ur tone was so convincing of the reality of the show!.Nice job!
P!.S!. I haven't been to Georgia, but I got the hunch now to make a trip down there, just to watch the sun winking through branches of Georgia pines!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I see joy in ever line of this beautiful poem!. I also stopped at the word "naughty", but found that it was delightful rather than forcing the rhyme scheme you created!.

A grand love, passing gently into the new day and the next lover!.

Magnificent!
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Do your friends know about this!? I truly like this BMG, for what that's worth!.!.!.!.(Shhhh, but that aroma business!.!.!.Man , I can still smell her, the nape of her neck, where that hair fell so wildly>>>) Thanks big guy
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that was beautiful my favorite line was " Dew drenched delicate petals lofted by the wind" that line just caught me into the poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

Bob- I was blown away by this!.
Each word seems strategically placed!.
Bringing more definition and gratitude
to each passing thought!.
You are a Picasso with words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

For some reason I was thrown off by the "naughty" talk at then end, otherwise I really enjoyed the poem-Very visualWww@QuestionHome@Com

I think your poem was lovely, I particularly liked the last stanza!. Please accept my warm compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Really takes the reader in and sees what you are seeing!. Good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Should I !?
Would I !?
Oh, DO I !

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VERY well done, in all regards!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bob,

Clean smooth writing!. Nice work!. I enjoyed your poem!.

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