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Position:Home>Poetry> How would you rate my poem?Question: How would you rate my poem!? I'm bored, so I wrote this!. I'm 14, so it may not be too good!. Good or bad comments appreciated!.
Beautiful blue eyes Rather impressive thighs Gorgeous blonde hair Heart-shaped derrière Incredibly strong arms Undeniable charm Considerable bulge in his pants Makes me rant Tasty abdominal muscles That taste like white truffle Perfectly chiseled chest He’s the best He’s the boy of my dreams I hope he likes whipped cream So slender and trim I long to touch him Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: You have done an excellent job of poetry in motion!. I feel as if I am seeing this person through your eyes -- I call that Painting with Words -- the title of my self published book!. No wasted words -- Good Job! T!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Not Bad!. I like it!. Sexy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com 6/10 nice though~~Www@QuestionHome@Com |