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Question: Is this good enough to be published!?
And if it is where at what website!?


Life

Depressed doesn't even begin to describe
The pain I am feeling inside
I feel like I am alone in this fight
The fight we call life
It can be hard all alone
No one there to call your own
Not even a friendly face
To cheer you up during this unending race
Some say to get over the fact
That the ones I lost are never coming back
Or the people I once held dear
Could care less if I was even here
Some ask why I am so depressed
Some ask why I am so stressed
If they only could feel this pain that I feel
The pain that is so hard to describe
The only real way to describe it would be
Life!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think you're missing a good structure!.
You need to use more!.!.!. creative adjectives!.
Proper grammar and speech as well!.

You do have talent, but you need more practice!.
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It's good just have to work on the ending!. Keep it up on poetry and on life!

Cheer up! When things get to the worst they suddenly start to get better!.

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It's more than good enough its GREAT i love it !Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is good!. Why don't you try to send it to a magazine like, Poetry!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

that is really good you should post it on www!.gspoetry!.comWww@QuestionHome@Com