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Question: Is my poem worthy of being published
Do comment on my poem!. Muchos Gracias!

Sprinkle of Sarkastika

I felt a feeling massive, hung
Built in strength from inside my lung
Travelled up from my bowels
It made me secrete these majestic vowels
Onto the white space of paper
To be lost into poems coming later

The tip of feathers caressed in ink
My thoughts are arches that I must link
Grandeur many, the vast plains of intelligent patter
Compressed into one millionth's matter
Wisely, like a grey all knowing owl I am , before I retreat into my bed
I must conclude my words – I wish them to be read
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
You have sprinkled some sarcasm here!. From the bowels come great words and sounds! As to being worthy to publish!.!.!.sure!. That is why they have vanity presses!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes absolutely!

You should definately follow it up!.

http://www!.authorsden!.com/
is a great place to start!.
Its a website for showing new stories, poems ect!. and people can leave comments and suggestions for you!.

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Yeh Absolutely!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes! Good luck!
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As I said before, I'd need to study it for a bit first but I know good work when I see it and this is mucho bien!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes! I like it!. Smart and witty!. Well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice poem!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com