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Question: Please give advice about my poem
Inchy Twichy Bibble Boo
Rainbow sky high moooooo
I ran to the barn
I found a ham
he had a yoke
the pitch fork was gone Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
What is this!?
This is a joke right!?
Your making fun of poetry!?
you told me my poems where alright
but um!.!.!.obviously you don't know
good poetryWww@QuestionHome@Com

And your point is!.!.!.!? I think you should put more meaning into it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It has no meaning!. Its just empty words Www@QuestionHome@Com

this is kinda stupid
you bag on other peoples poems but of course your make no senceWww@QuestionHome@Com