I just want 2 know what ppl think of my poems (good or bad)

Question: I just want 2 know what ppl think of my poems (good or bad)

I CRY

I cry all the time
but never for anyone to see
I cry like it is a crime
behind locked doors and I have the key

I lock the door and let no one in
so no one will have to see me when I am sad
they would have to pick the lock with a pin
if they wanted to come in that bad

but who world want in just to see me cry
they always walk by with out a care all the time
when they asked what I have been doing I just lie
I cant let them know I was committing a crime

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Yes, you are pretty good!. Seems as though you've been writing a while!. Keep it up, it only gets better!. Your topic was sad and interesting, I think we have all felt a little like that at some point!. Check out a few of mine, you might relate!. (in my questions, like you)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I liked it too!. People who walk by you seemingly without a care have their own problems, that's why they don't notice you!. They probably have bigger problems than you do!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice!. Crying is only a crime when you run out of tears!.

Keep writing!.

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its lovely!.!.!. its simply !.!.!.!.!.gr8
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wow I love this one too!. reminds me of someone!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

yessss! you're good at writing poetry girl!!!!
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