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Question: Is this poem any good!? What do you think it's about!?
I am all too eager to listen, all too eager to tell!.
I fought for rights and wrote the wrongs all while trying to avoid hell!.
I've been criticized and ostracized and labeled as uncool
But what they see that I refuse is I'm a defective tool!.
I suffocate while wallowing no intentions of swallowing
Any kind of pride because that's not what I'm intended for

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Ok well it's kind of deep and I think to really figure it out you have to unravel it bit by bit!. I think it is a good poem, it really makes you stop and think!. Well honestly it makes me think of school!. In general high school!. It makes me think about how we all want people to hear our own stories and we're eager to start growing up and learn what we have to do!. But it also makes me think of how sometimes high school can be cruel and sometimes people start rumors and/or try to damage your reputation, or just completely ignore you!. also the last lines make me think of how some of us can't swallow our pride, which in this case I kinda feel likes its a good thing cause it means in the poem they don't mind standing up to others and being an independent being rather than just sitting down, shutting up, and shutting down so that they can be excepted!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

no it horrible just kidding it goodWww@QuestionHome@Com

wow, it's crazy good!.
sounds kinda like dealing with gossipWww@QuestionHome@Com