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Question: What is your life like, a jigsaw, maze or a tapestry!?
Enigmata happens
by Jellz Fisher 080809
Pieces of me!.
Each word forms
intricate connecting
patterns leading
to bigger picture
Hues and colours
combined!.
Palette using
strokes broad or
feathered highlight!.
Try not to decipher
or anticipate
next placement!.
Just enjoy
what you see
coming to life!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
A maze at first!. A jigsaw later!. And hopefully a tapestry of memories for others when gone!.
Great third stanza!. On stanza 1 to me either add 'a' after to on L4 or drop 'to'!. Maybe plural on highlight in stanza 2Www@QuestionHome@Com
My life events appear to be so serendipitous!. It is really quite interesting how things happen JUST so!.
Rather than try to force an issue, I love sitting back and watching it unfold, naturally!.
I am truely enjoying my trip around the sun!.
But to answer your question in a more direct way!.!.!.!.!.My life is muti-layered,delicious and sometimes down-right exciting!.!.!.!.!.Juuuuust like a quadrupled -layered SURPRISE DESERT!.
P!.S!. I JUST read your poem!. VERY good, Jam!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This poem sounds like an intro for more to come!. You're doing great - can't wait!.
My life is all of the above - facets mixed, joined, hinged, overlayed, underlayed, melted, fused - all parts of current project under construction ?Www@QuestionHome@Com
my life was a jig saw, with a few pieces missing, now its a maze, but i can see the tapestry at the end of the tunnel!Www@QuestionHome@Com
J, if any poem ever described you, this is it!. Stunning third stanza!.
I know I'm not alone in saying we always enjoy what you bring to our lives!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i love this part
Pieces of me!.
Each word forms
intricate connecting
patterns leading
to bigger picture
very artistic keep writing Www@QuestionHome@Com
Recalls a song: "I know the pieces fit/ I saw them fall apart!.!.!."Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like to think that life is like a Maze;- after many twists and turns you finally reach peace and tranquility!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Mine is a jigsaw puzzle pieces falling into places!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i would like to think of mine as; History In the Making!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Is this what they call a pop quiz!?
Actually, prior to coffee, not much!
Good one!Www@QuestionHome@Com
my life is a baked beanWww@QuestionHome@Com
Uhhhhhhhh!.!.!.Mine is closer to a soup sandwich
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I like it!. It flows nicelyWww@QuestionHome@Com
I can't really enjoy my life!.!.!.it's hard! haaha!.!.!.but ur poem's nice, though!.!.!.!.!.but try to make it deeper!.!.!.!.!.!.
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