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Question: What do you find when you go looking!?
Reflections
by Jellz Fisher 080809
I saw her in the mirror one time
Glazed eyed, ragged from time’s passage!.
Never said much to me, but the look…!.
Unmistakable!.
I saw her in the window of a passing bus
Haggard, hassled and needing to be somewhere
Never heard her reasons, but the look…!.
Undeniable!.
I saw her in the pools of the eyes of a child once
Hopeful, trusting, reflecting peace and love
Never saw her again, but the look…!.
Unrepeatable!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Truly - to see oneself through our own eyes!. We spend - most of our time - living from the inside out!. Rarely - do we get a picture of ourselves - from the outside in!. Often surprising ourselves - to really - see how tired, sick, old, happy, sad - we are!. Well done on expressing - an often neglected viewpoint!. ? Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is my favorite of yours, truly inspiring!.
I saw her in my dream, the other day
Beautiful, radiant and warm
Never got to hold her, but the look
Unforgettable
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"Hi!",
Good evening too you! : )
wow, great poem off the bat today!.
Written well, described well, great imagery!.
WELL DONE!
Cheers : )
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A grey sky,a rainy day,
droplets running down the window pane!.
A dark,lonely and quiet night,
hoping tomorrows daybreak brings sunlight!.
A forlorn and dirty city!.
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J to the Z!.!.!.You should step out more!. Not oft I see you post as of late!. Your reflective pen works quite well when you turn it toward your self !.!.!.Peace,RWww@QuestionHome@Com
wow *stunned*
beautiful mind i say!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
That is honestly beautiful!. =]Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is one of the best of yours that I have read!. My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com