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Position:Home>Poetry> Thoughts on my poem?...'Forever in Us'Question: Thoughts on my poem!?!.!.!.'Forever in Us' pulse racing!. pounding!. (hear it!?) sweat running!. trembling!. (feel it!?) Sweet scent!. went!. (lovliness) forever in me Face!. trace!. (memory) forever in me Voice!. a choice!. (i love you) forever in me Lips!. imprint!. (together) forever in me Soft!. aloft!. (serenity) forever in me Remember!. No!. We have forever!. Together!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Beautiful poem, isn't it great to find love!? I wish you both the very best and pray that unlike me you both can be together forever!. Best WishesWww@QuestionHome@Com NICE ONEWww@QuestionHome@Com |