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Question: Thoughts on my poem!?!.!.!.'Forever in Us'

pulse racing!.

pounding!. (hear it!?)

sweat running!.

trembling!. (feel it!?)

Sweet scent!. went!. (lovliness)
forever in me

Face!. trace!. (memory)
forever in me

Voice!. a choice!. (i love you)
forever in me

Lips!. imprint!. (together)
forever in me

Soft!. aloft!. (serenity)
forever in me

Remember!.

No!.

We have forever!. Together!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Beautiful poem, isn't it great to find love!? I wish you both the very best and pray that unlike me you both can be together forever!.

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