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Position:Home>Poetry> If at 1st you irritate....Would a follow up be accepted?Question: If at 1st you irritate!.!.!.!.Would a follow up be accepted!? Survivors’ Anonymous Here I go again Trying to fit in Another day on trial As I justify my denial Hiding amidst a society That can’t indulge sobriety Whatever it takes they say To get you through the day I guess count to ten if you must Bow down and pray In God We Trust Take it easy one day at a time One beer after work isn’t a crime Chase the pain with some dessert A glutton for escapism bring on the hurt Life one on one seems a bit much Better when two succumb to the touch Perhaps turn the page on a sordid novel Find yourself in the bottom of a bottle Exorcise your demons while running the race Burnt out eyes stuck on a happy face Do what you will for you own thrill Peace is now waiting in a pretty little pill No wrong or right in man’s so called democracy Forgiveness is balanced in a shot of hypocrisy Maybe for you it’s not booze or dope The safe way home is at the end of a rope Hi!. My name is Hydropro!. I’m a survivor!. ?rad060307Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: How strange that some that read your words,really can not see, It surely is not difficult, For like you there are many, tortured by lifes offerings, scathed and so afraid, uncertain of awakenings that fill their empty days!. What lays ahead, we do not know, just hope to make it through!. Tomorrow is a new day, waiting there for you!. And as with every new day, our struggle will begin, but for us, we have the beauty, of recognising we may sin!.Www@QuestionHome@Com You are indeed one of the best survivors I have had the privilege of meeting!. This life is probably not a dress rehearsal, grab every golden experience, share kind words, write poetry! Www@QuestionHome@Com Demons come in many ways to haunt!. Obvious you have encountered and survived many to date!. Thanks for sharing this story!.Www@QuestionHome@Com In losing everything we find ourselves; if we can only manage to survive the loss!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Your poem is very graphic!. Had the poet not survived, the world would be poorer for it today!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Personally, I like being inebriated, as long as everyone else is the designated driver!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com One step into a bar and twelve to get out!. I like living too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Can I get that life extra spicy!? I'll gladly pay the extra cents!. Stay strongWww@QuestionHome@Com I like it until "One beer after work isn't a crime" After that, in my opinion, you loose itWww@QuestionHome@Com "That which does not kill us makes us stronger!." NietzscheWww@QuestionHome@Com If there are not two steps in place Don't step back, stand in place, without step two, all that is behind is the same quicksand!. you can't do this for some one else, it has to be for yourself!. Not to prove or make a point!. To unlock the door to relief, and life time victory!, for self!. Edit, It takes one to know one, I knew who you were, by your second poem read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Stu!.!.!.!.pid!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |