What do you think to this poem?

Question: What do you think to this poem!?

I love you like there's no tomorrow
I nearly drowned in all my sorrow!.
All those tears were just for you
And you dont even realize what i do!.
I'm writing this poem from the heart
I have loved you from the very start!.
I'm just going crazy
You seem to amaze me!.
You always ignore me
Can't understand why!.
I always try to move on
Because my love clearly hasn't shone!.
I always imagine our lips get intertwined
That dreams getting further, we haven't spoken in a long time!.
I hope you read this and realize it's about you
Somehow I know I'll pull through!.
Because I realized, I actually love you!
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i love it! you are soo talented and i can feel your emotion through it!. i absolutely adore it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

hey im sry dude, ive had a similar problem i knw how u feel
i really like it u almost explain exactly what happened to mei love the part when you say í always imagine our lips intertwined' listen pls pls could you all do me a favour and tell me what you tink about my poem http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!. thanks and comment pls

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good luck ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com

It is full of cliches!. The subject matter is not expressed poetically!. It is just a collection of ryming sentences and its construction is poor!. Now go re-write it!.

If you think I am being harsh on you, I am not!. The only way you'll improve is if you hear the truth!. Not the false opinions of ten point chasers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

im going to queot you
I'm writing this poem from the heart
I have loved you from the very start!.

since you said that you dont need noone to tell you how good your poem is cuz your writing it from your heartWww@QuestionHome@Com

It could use a little fine polishing, but its really nice!. The fact that you wrote it, well, you should be well chuffed! Its innocent and gentle, and that shows what a lovely person you are! Keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com

awwwe,
that is an amazing poem!.
& you writing it from the heart makes it that much more special,
to the person you are talking about :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Honestly!. I don't mean to burst your proverbial bubble!.
But this poem is the most cliche stringing together of words that I have heard in a very long time!. I didn't like it at all!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very good, i really liked it

tell me if u like my poem
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im gonna be truthful, its a very immature poem, in fact it isnt a poem its more like a phone callWww@QuestionHome@Com

A succession of unconvincing cliches which neither move nor inform!.
And "our lips intertwined"!?!? What are you, aliens!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's good but there is a really big slice of cheese on it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

it's really sweet,you must really be in love!Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's great!. I like it loads :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awwww! Thats well cute did you write it!? :-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it :) please write more!. Really cute <3Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very Sweet!Www@QuestionHome@Com