What do you think of my Beautiful Mars Trigee (Edited Version)

Question: What do you think of my Beautiful Mars Trigee (Edited Version)

Talcum Powder!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Sawdust dunes,
Flower Of Zinc!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.In rustic hues,
Beauty so rare!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Such radiant glare,
Spontaneous imp!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Mars Crimson flare!.
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Nice one!. If Mars is uninhabitable, we might have to move to Perth!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You are very good at this!.

Spell Chick would not pick up flower/flour because it can't understand English and does not target words spelled correctly but used out of context!.

That's what human editors are for!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Dang Girl you are really getting xra good at this!
(Spell check is in a frenzy) right now! Great job and well done! Imagination off the charts!! Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com

buhjones - thanks for my first actual laugh in days!!!!

I read your first one and I liked it better, more poetic, less shopping list!. You have great word imagary (if that's a term)Www@QuestionHome@Com

differentWww@QuestionHome@Com

given I dont know what a trigee is I will say its the best damn trigee i ever read!. 10/10Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

NOW it is perfect!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i donna know why i can not understand it!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com