My Short poems about experiences, love, death and life.... Please read them

Question: My Short poems about experiences, love, death and life!.!.!.!. Please read them

I'm 15 y/o female and have been writing poetry for around 3 months!. This is a small collection of my pieces!. Please read them and coment!.

The Link to my Poems:
http://l3luel3ubbles!.piczo!.com/mypoems!?p!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

They're not bad, don't get me wrong!.
But they're so plain! Try to spice it up a bit, make each line longer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com