Do u like this poem or not

Question: Do u like this poem or not

Gora Ndiaye

Go near the river and look for my man
On the rocks near the swans there he stand
Run near the ocean by the sand
And look for him there he stands
Near the lake by the rocks
Dancing in his silly socks
I Trust him hand by hand
And you should to because hes my man
Youll learn how to swin with his hands
Everywhere the oceans meets there he standsWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Skool,
This is interesting
because this poem is talking about
the ocean or the river
Along both of these bodies of water
are rocks!.
Beside each of these are also the sand!.
Learning to swim
In the lakes yes but the river no
for the current can be strong and
sweep one under!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Actually, not at all!.
I don't really have anything nice to say about it!.
It starts out serious, and then you switch to this silly socks, bull!.
It doesn't make any sense!.
And the meter is way far off!.
Personally, I think it sucks!.

Ask a blunt question!. Get a blunt answer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it has potential!.!.!.
but u dont need to rhyme, its holding you back!.

answer mine:
http://ca!.answers!.yahoo!.com/question/ind!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No!. It's a bit nonsensical!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not reallyWww@QuestionHome@Com