How do you like my "Pre-Dawn" pome?

Question: How do you like my "Pre-Dawn" pome!?

Pre-Dawn
by Elaine Polin

In this pre-dawn hour
I caress the keys
of my computer—
only your faces
and your poems
fill the darkened sky!.

Ocean, still hidden
by dark, clouded skies
has no words for me,
but your poetry
sings through the night
comforting my heart
restoring my soul!.

This miracle machine
gives me the power
to travel at light speed
to the ends of the Earth
and beyond its atmospher
to our virtual Planet
and to the stars!.

I am grateful
to the Creator
for the machine
and for all
of you!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Aaahh! I see our thoughts and connections enveloping the world like a string purse, glittering in space, a magical modem macrame!.

Good morning!.

Lovely words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

In view of the words of praise, the twist of complementary phrase, the extension of thoughts added beyond your verse, from others above me,,, it sounds rather bland, and yes, even boring,,, to utter my simple, honest words of appreciation!.

Yet, simple words are all I have to offer, I hope you will take this in the spirit intended,,,

well done, well done indeed!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The last part rings so true!.My friends and family always thought I was a little bit "out there"!.Since finding this spot and out-let, I am so grateful!.I feel as though I have made new friends, even though I don't know you at all!.Each day I look forward to the many poets who contribute their work to this site!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Bless you also!.

IBM - It's Bloomin' Marvellous!.
MS - My Saviour
ACER - All Computers Embrace 'riters
DOS - Draws Our Souls !?!?!?
BYTE - Bet You Tell Everyone
MODEM - Makes Our Days Even Merrier

(sorry I went from the sublime to the ridiculous in 10seconds flat then)
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Oh, I am sorry I did not read this earlier! I can just imagine you in the early hours (dès potron-minet!.!.!.), next to the ocean, letting the words flow from your heart, your head in Mars!. The poem shows how good a person you are!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

A beautiful and grateful poem!. The computer is a life-line!. It brings joy and closeness to what could be afar!. We are most fortunate for this machine and our fellow Poets of Mars!. Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I agree and can very much appreciate what this poem is saying!. We have the world at our finger tips and I am thankful for all the people I've met and the things I have learned!. Very lovely sentiment and free verse!. We are grateful for you too :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!",

Take me out of this Atmosphere and zoom me off to mars!.
This vvirtual planet has became my reality too! LOL : )

Beautiful poem!.
WELL DONE!
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Now, don't you want to just hug the thing!? Go ahead, no one is watching!. Wait, we caught you! Computers have souls, we converse!. You conversed quite well with this offfering!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You do know you are special!.!.!. don't you!? I agree with you, if not for this interface I would be less!.!.!. by being part of the sum of all of us I am more!.

!.!.!.beautifully said by you!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Thank you for touching us so lovingly in this manner!. The computer is a miracle at work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Many miles away your thoughts are picked up!. Transmitted over same oceans and so very well received!. So glad you are there for us!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow! I think this is a completely WONDERFUL poem!. Pleasure to read:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

There is nothing I can say to this except, Amen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

the same about, and to you too Elaine!.
wth you up so early for!?
lol!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

How touching, and sweet, we count our blessings and come up on top!
GM to you above the gloom!.Www@QuestionHome@Com