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Question: Where will you place when you show!?

Horsing Around

Colt 49
Lead to the track
Thoroughly bred to run
Away
I'm off kilter
Leading the pack
As I come around
Bend to my last turn
Back stretched
Flying to the end
Ahead by who knows
Photo
Finished

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Some times the simple ones say the most!. This is one of those!. My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well paced to present the racing atmosphere!. Slight intro (before race) - great amount of action and detail (during race) - and the release of tension and let down (of the photo finish)!. Well done ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now that one wasn't run at Jefferson Downs!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

awww man and to think I had $10 on you! I need to know the final result!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

lol very cute! I loved it!. I pictured a frozen (like still, not ice) man at the end!. lolWww@QuestionHome@Com

great title, it makes this poem fun!.!.!.got more like this!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com