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Question: Do you have time for a tri-quain!.!.!.
``Bittersweet``

Loud silence
Screaming out to deaf ears
For actions that were misunderstood
Forgiveness without words ever being spoken
Quiet noise


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I have the time and I am glad that I took it!. This is a beautiful piece, especially line four!. "Forgiveness without words ever being spoken," just a glance between you and the one you love more than anything, knowledge emanating, communicating between two glances!.!.!.bittersweet yes, and beautiful!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am a firm believer in loud silence!. Arguing until exhausted only begets more injured feelings!. A silence, quiet, gives reflection and atonement without words needed!. Well said!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice, simply stated and complete!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This was gentle and quiet and loud and shouting at the same time! Now that is a job well done, enjoyed it! Cheers!Www@QuestionHome@Com