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Question: "Babel" A Trigee try, what o you think!?
George O'!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.he was an author
who wrote!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.then of now
a book of!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. vision, poignant
fiction!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.his truth foreseen!?
take a look!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.compare the pen
to now, to see!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.stranger then fiction
his reality!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.or a madman's dream
without mention!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.of a Bible Book
savior!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.some call a madman too!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Interesting!. The last line did not flow as well for me!. 'Stranger than fiction' cliched, maybe just twist to 'fiction, so strange!.' This is not bad, especially since it has nine lines, making it harder to keep continuity between all three!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You and I are experiencing the same problem with Poem #2!. The Trigee is the most difficult form I have ever encountered!. Keep trying; it will happen eventually!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sorry Jenny, it might just be me but this dosent appear to "flow right"
i know this is a very hard dicipline, so keep going, it will be worth it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com