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Question: What do you think of my poem!?!?!?!?
I wrote it about 5 minutes ago!.!.!.
just tell me if you like it please!!


Honestly, who am I trying to be!?
I'm only fooling me,
confused and footless
no where to turn but to you!.

I let down my guard,
let you see who I am,
but all good things come
to an end!.

Another cliche',
another unwanted truth!.
can't quit running,
can't keep following!.

So I turn to face the truth!.
And it's no where to be found!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
i think that is very good! well writen and good job! keep writing poetry u are very good at it!. =D it is very true and awesomeWww@QuestionHome@Com

well, "i love you" although your sentiment is pure and I actually like the use of the word ( footless ) because it is uncommon and refreshing!. However, the poem is, to use your term, cliche' in the respect that it sounds like another teenager has been hurt by her boyfriend and sat down and wrote out of hurt -for lack of a better term!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like a good start to me, I guess, you'll be adding a couple of lines in the end, because it seems a little cut short!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like!. Really connects with me and my current situation!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it, it's really good!. How did you come up with it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com