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Question: What happens when a bunch of words get together!?
You know how it is!.

I hardly ever use
big words,
bigger than
my mind allows
me to expand!.

Since the enclosed
space will not
accept air
inwards!.
It would be trapped
and circulated,
until staleness
laid it waste,
and the thinking,
be it current or
historical,
leaked and mixed
in a melange of
gunk (did I say” melange”!?
Did I say “gunk”!?)

Ooh sorry about
the open window up there!
I hope it takes wing
and flies out!.

No room I’m afraid!.
The “full house” sign is up!.
A naked hush descends
The performance
waits til the orchestra
is ready!.

“Let her rip Boris”
is the cry
from the back!.
It’s a worry!.
A big one if you ask me!.
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That was fun to read!. (smile)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Not much!.!.!. unless you coax them and prod them and fit them and face them and let them say what need be said and get these words out your head and set them loose on wings of birds !.!.!.until then my friend, they are just words!.

Game on, JWww@QuestionHome@Com

Focus, just once!. You have a poetic soul!. It is at war with whatever else is inside you!. Let the serious part flow for once!. You are a real poet; I want to see that reality--clean, focused, hitting the bullseye!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You did it to me again!.!.!.and this is a brandy new 17" flat screen de-luxe monitor! Gracie's cleaning the carpet!.!.!.
This is a great example of what words can do!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

"Hi!",
My house is a haunted mansion!. All is left is old ideas and no constructive new ones!.
Great poem so funny!. LOL : )

WELL DFONE
Cheers : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

The words seem tro be having fun together!. They are flowing and bouncing off one another taking on a life of their own!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You probably have six potential poems locked in there!. If you were expanding on this free write, S2 is where I would start to pull something out from first!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That's exactly how I've been feeling lately!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Funny, now where is the cigar!? Embers can light things!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That was GREAT! Keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com