A poem about the creating process. Would you care to comment?

Question: A poem about the creating process!. Would you care to comment!?

False Opening

Open !. !. !.
a computer file
then
open up the mind;
the words begin to come!.
They hit the screen;
as keys clickety-click
and a stanza is formed!.
Wait !. !. !.
for a thought,
a feeling,
a sound,
something seen or remembered!.
Fingers steady,
senses enlivened;
at the ready,
try to push away the brain clouds
but alas !. !. !.
the mind is a total blank
the last line is a dead end!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

It's good, it's pretty astute to write about writers block! I like it!. To be perfectly honest, I personally would stay away from phrases like "open up the mind" because I feel they are cliche and unoriginal!.
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Like the floodgates of thought - open up - as the fingers hit the keys!. Story progresses - lines start to be harder to pull through - taking more thought - pushing uphill!. Oh, how I hope - there will be a reasonable ending - before the floodgates close once more!. Please not in the middle of a sentence !.!.!.!.!.?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Never a 'dead end', turn!.!.!.write!

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Like the ending!. "the last line is a dead end" - brilliant! thanks for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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