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Question: Have you time for seven lines!?
"Shadowed Reality" - septolet

If you
could only see
my true
heart,

your world,
your faith,
would shatter!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sure, I have time!. My, you do have a knack for saying things that nobody knows what means!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.but I shall never see your heart; you will not walk down my path and knock at my door, even when I tell you to come inside!. You only see what is in you, never daring to leave that comfort that binds you to yourself!. My world is open and free and my heart, my world, long ago was shattered!.!.!. my faith is like a breeze turned to storm!.!.!. ever changing, always growing, relentless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

lovely, like actualy!.

http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

no, i
can fly out
any fleshy
heart

so many
holes like
swiss cheese!.


(Eva, i'm just role playing a septolet conversation!.!.!.)
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Or eyes would open
And truly see

Thank you lady, again for my edification

Blessed BeWww@QuestionHome@Com

I have seen your true heart!. It is not such a dangerous place, once past the guns and dogs!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm sorry!. I'm much to busy!. Try again later!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow! That was potent!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Killer ending eva!.!.!.it reminds me of a line I like from Neruda!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

ok!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Seven lines of what, lol!?

Shatter my illusions all over the place, lemme see your heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

of couse i have time !.
my what a wonderful poem, reminds me of some painful memoriesWww@QuestionHome@Com