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past suicide and present love

i use to love death because i hated this life i possesed
thinking making cuts on my wrist would relieve some stress

it only brought more pain on me behind my locked door
regreting the things i did repeating what did i do that for


i had made my misery one of my closest of bestfriend
because it seemed like the only thing that didnt pretend


my nights consisted of a pillow filled with wet tears
mornings were nothing but anger i had survived another year


but now ive found my happy he eliminates all my pains
so meant to be hes the blood that flows through my veins


the chemistry we share it seems too good to be true
i swear i will never forget our first i love you


my views of life are now in a whole new perspective
no longer will i be alone engaging to introspective


a whole new person i am!. im all smiles, ear to ear
i thank you for that and i promise you i will continue to be here


by me!.



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