My little poem - to fly to the sky and see the birds fly. Can you read and tell

Question: My little poem - to fly to the sky and see the birds fly!. Can you read and tell me what you think!?

I sit here in my tree
And look for the biggest gap in the cage of branches
Through which the world to see
And the world flies by
But no one seems to see me
Yet here I am, who I am
That which no thing can change
Not the fear of the world as it flies through time
Nor the sadness I see through my eyes
And the tears that fall as I watch people die
Not the hatred that builds as I see the birds fly
For the fly so free
Far freer than me
Trapped here in my treeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

its very peculiar, it looks like to me your trapped somewhere and nobody wants to help and as life goes on you continue to be forgotten!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. It's sort of like looking at the world through a third different perspective!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

It sounds like you're trying to be deep and dark, but it's not working out!.
Cut down on the rhyming though!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i actually like itWww@QuestionHome@Com

This is actually really good!.
for some reason the line "yet here I am, who I am" really got to me!.

i dig it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com