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Question: Could I call this a Scotkin!?
"Silver Whispers"

Wise owl hoots,
distant flutes,
sweet mystery!.
Night falling!.

Dim starlight,
moon gleams bright
kissing the earth!.
Night falling!.

All at peace,
sweet release
opening heart!.
Night falling!.

Fools rush in,
love no sin,
secrets are made!.
Night fell!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
There you go again another very pretty piece of poetry and found another favorite part in this one too! Not trying to take it apart or anything like that ! Just some of what you write just stands out to me a verse, a stanza! Oh my this is my favorite out of this one!!

All at peace,
sweet release
opening heart!.
Night falling

This is indeed sooo relaxing when reading it, just beautiful, thank you for sharing your work!!
I love your title
Sliver Whispers or
Scotin Silver Whispers,
has the ring of elegance
Cheers!!
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Call it very nice!. Do you need "the" in line 2 stanza 2 and "are" in line 3 stanza 4!? Just a thought!. Overall, well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'd rather call it great! The imagery is wonderful and you are very kind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is peaceful and lovely to read!Www@QuestionHome@Com