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Question: Oh god, oh god, I tried a trigee!. Do you like lemon pie!?
To quote dearest Grannyjill, ignore my question, and answer the damn poem!.

Tampered with Evidence - (sorrowful Terran attempt at trigee)

Withering flowers!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.in the wind
speak a message!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.voices echo,
rising above belief!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.evading mortality!.
Night still falls!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.but not forever!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I think your trigee works really well, any way I read it!. To me, it is not sad at all!. As long as voices echo!.!.!. And "evading mortality" sounds like an inner signature!

And, if you really want to know, yes, I like lemon pie, but without meringue!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is quite beautiful, you did a wonderful job here with your poetry! My favorite is the left side, and oh how I love it , just so beautiful!

Withering flowers!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
speak a message!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. ,
rising above belief!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
Night still falls!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.

There is just something about that left side that appeals so much to me! Not that the right side isn't good because it is! It is just that left side is so beautiful, it reminds me of Haiku, and how I love that kind of writing!

I also have one myself in the working, I am hoping mine is as good as the one you have done, this is not easy, and you have done it well!!
Cheers!!!-----More More More

PS Yes I love lemon pie with or without the meringue!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I like!.!.!.both the poem and lemon pie!.!.!.but!.!.!.lemon pie and withering flowers!. Oh, well!. As for me trying (sounds entirely too much like math, so I'll maybe pass) a trigee!.!.!.it's debatable!. (Swatting the damned eraser!. ) Let's see if we have to put a cap on Trigree!.!.!.'pears he likes that!. Sheesh!. He says 'trigger' for the trigee!.
I need two aspirin!. Am putting my paper cover back up over the right side of the screen!.
And, it 'taint sorrowful! So there!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love it; excellent, I would have assumed you were used to wrting trigee`s!.

I never had lemon pie!. sorry to lovers of lemon pie, but the sound of lemon in pie grosses me out!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, all things come to an end!. The curse of a trigee which you have evaded is when the two are combined and flow becomes halting!. Very well done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a wonderful Trigee!. Of all the poetic forms, I find this one most difficult!. I believe yours has many levels of meaning!. I especially like "voices echo," an expression which adds sound to the poem(s)!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have trouble with trigees, but they are so elegant when done, you can't write just one! Make that Key lime pie for me, please!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hahaha! You all crack me up! (I don't care for lemon pie!)
I think you did it fabulously!!
I need to move on to something else!. I think I'm addicted to trigees!Www@QuestionHome@Com

lets see!.!.!.pie, or trigaree!.!.

http://www!.omgwhatever!.com/farmer/pieman!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like poems that are more inspirational!. This one reminds me of sadness, suicide!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, I like it, much!.Www@QuestionHome@Com