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Question: Help with a poem I'm writing!?
This is for english homework by the way!.

I need something that describes 'dreams', this is the 4th paragraph:
I hate your guilt, your greed, your wants
Your stupid hair, the things you flaunt
Your deadened hope, your ___ dreams
(A line here I've yet written!.!.!.!.!.)

I was going to say crushed, but that doesn't fit in what I'm writing about (I need a word that is sort of meaing "impossible" or "hopeless" that has 2 syllables)
Oh and its a poem about hate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
How about the word 'futile'!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

How about this:

But the thing I hate the most that you do,
You make me hate that I truly hate you!.

Or Replace that with this:

But the thing I hate the most that you do,
You make me hate how much I love you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.try "silly", "foolish", "low-brow", "empty", "hopeless" or "impossible"Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hi there, you may find this site helpful when writing poems it has words that rhyme and related words and definitions etc!.!.!. it is called rhymezone!.com check it out it may helpWww@QuestionHome@Com

Pointless!?
Senseless!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Worthless!.
Sky-high!.
Constant!.
Desperate!.
Futile!.
Hope those work out for you!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com