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Question: Critique My Poem: Cry Cry Hubby
Cry cry cry
Cry cry Darling
I am not going to awake
Cry cry baby
You want love
No no
Tomorrow I go to work
Cry cry honey
It is 3 o’clock in the morning
Cry cry hubby
Turn your back
And have a nap
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Sounds like he's not gettin' any tonight!Www@QuestionHome@Com