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Question: Plz tell me what u think about my poem!
When I’m With You”
Brittany Evanko
After I see you from a long day
Sometimes we have nothing to say
We just lie still and hear our hearts race together!.
I feel as if time should stay still forever!.
Feeling you brush your fingers through my hair,
I blink twice, just to believe you’re really there!.
The taste of your kiss sends chills up my spine!.
The feelings I have are too strong to define!.
Your scent follows me even when you’re not there!.
When I’m with you, nothing in this world can compare!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That is a BEAUTIFUL poem!!
VERY NICE!!
I would get it published if I were you!!
and make sure someone doesn't STEAL it from you and call it their own and get it published before you!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow thats really good and i mean it i write poems every now and then but not as good as this oneWww@QuestionHome@Com
I LIKE IT!Www@QuestionHome@Com
so deep i love it make a card with this lmaooooo!.!. =DWww@QuestionHome@Com