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Question: Who, what ,where and why or how do you have storms!?
Evening storm
by C!.S!. Scotkin

South wind blow,
all leaves show
duller matte side!.
Storm coming!.

Cats hide heads
under beds!.
invisible thunder!.
Storm coming!.

Slate sky low!.
Rumbles grow!.
Lightening spears air!.
Storm coming!.

Rain lashes,
open gashes,
cat-o-nine-tails!.
Storm here!.


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
If there's not a name for this form, we should call it the Scotkin!. I love the repeated line at the end of each stanza, with the subtle alteration in the last, the three and four syllable variation!.!.!.would you mind if I tried one!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I see there's lots of discussion on this particular style of poem!. I'll put in my 2 cents worth into the pot!.!.!.!. I love it!. I have no idea what you're doing, but I find it most refreshing and well thought out and it flows like butter!. Sets a mood perfectly in this piece!. Very nice reading and my kudos for inventing your very own "styling"!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.that shall forever be named after thee!.!.!.!.!.!.
"the Scotkin"!Www@QuestionHome@Com

(tiny suggestion - lightning not lightening)

Shall I answer your question and get up Elaine's nose!?

No, I think I'll read your poem!.!.!.!.and very glad I am that I did!. They are like little Haikus all strung in a row (I know the syllable count is wrong) but the subject matter would fit exactly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow! Very good!

(by the way, thanks for choosing me best answer for the other poem)!.


I love your poetry!.!.!.It's beautiful!.
Sure, I'd be happy to send you mine sometime!.
Why don't you IM me sometime!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Apparently the storms are making the rounds!
Hug those kitties and puppy-dogs!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have joined the Creator's Club!. I am fairly certain this form belongs to you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

We had our big storms yesterday, it looks like more may be coming though!. It is getting very dark and dreary outside!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very good! This one marches right along!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

very good I really liked your use of who, what, where why, and how!.

hee hee!.Www@QuestionHome@Com