"She lays here in her own tears, drowning herself in her troubles
See nothing well we hear nothing either melt away nothing to see her!.
As her pain grows no one helps her!. They stand in a circle around her!. Watching her breath her last breath!. No one cares about her life thinking hers is better to risk!. They start to walk away one by one not caring if she is still alive!. They act like they saw nothing!. Will someone help her!? Will she make it to her parents!? Finally she hears some one scream for help!. A man runs to her side and cradles her in his arms!. He tells her everything will be ok!.!.!.!.he saved her!.!.!.He took her to a hospital and visited her everyday!.
Now shes a mother of two with the man that saved her!. He saved her the day no one would!."
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AND if you think of a name for it please tell me
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