A longer poem in haiku form (again, i am still kinda critical of it myself)

Question: A longer poem in haiku form (again, i am still kinda critical of it myself)

i taste blood & spit
i feel loathing & spite
sociopathic

i dream of vengance
i am falling far from grace
schizophrenic

i sweat, here alone
i hear & see corruption
isolationism

i write these thoughts down
i hope for some redemtion
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

No need to be critical of yourself,it only holds you back (creativily speaking) This is a true peice of work and i love it!.Forget what anyone else says!.Keep writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a bit worrying but it's good!. It sounds like you have some issues but it's good to get them out!. I like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

whoa, deep!. i like it! :) its very good and i get the meaning ;) nice msg!

VERY GOOD! KEEP WRITING (im a poet too! :D!)Www@QuestionHome@Com

me think this dry!. all line begin i--maybe you talk about someone else for change!?Www@QuestionHome@Com