What do you think of this trigee?

Question: What do you think of this trigee!?

Soft sand…………………………………… Like time,
Slowly sifts…………………………………!. Through the ages,
Between my………………………………… Dreams and reality,
Throbbing toes……………………………… Eventually stops!.

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This one is very good!. Three solid poems!. I have not worked on a Trigee for a while!. I'm trying to think of a surprise ending!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow!. I have written a couple of trigees, but I have never seen so much expressed in such few words!. You got to the point without a big to-do, and I like it that way!. Sometimes words can congest poems, but it seems you don't need to worry about that!. Overall, I love this trigee!. 9!.3/10!

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This trigee commands attention with a deep drill sergeant bellow!. True beauty encapsulated in a few words!. Picture perfect, all three!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

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You done well here! Especially got a chuckle out of the combined one!. My compliments!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

That is awesome!. I have never heard of a trigee!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.but very coolWww@QuestionHome@Com

I`ve never heard of it before, sounds good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com