Critque My Poem: I Fall in Love Easily

Question: Critque My Poem: I Fall in Love Easily

I fall in world of love easily
There is no explanation or excuses
I get bruised and bandaged
Time and time again
I went to see a doctor
For one vaccine or two
I fell in love with the receptionist
I turned around,left and
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Snap out of it(slapping you to bring you to your senses)!. You better get with the times and all this falling in love will get expensive for you!.lol!.
I think it is nice but dam the receptionist too!.
Wow!. I want some of what you are having!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Better than most

Needs seperate verses and more formality for the rhyming, and a better punch line!.
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Lol i like it alot that was really good and funny too!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

LOL very comical, this is a true baffle, love the twist !! Cheers!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!. It has a good story behind it!.!.!. however, I would work on the rhythm a little bit!. Other than that, nice!. =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hehe its quite nice and funny tooWww@QuestionHome@Com

very nice,
it's unique and i love it!!

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