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Herein lies a lie
Buried in possibility
Seen as impossibility!.
Not knowing why
I don't try!.
Someone may cry!.
The lie won't die!.
I only know I
Heave a sigh
Just say, "My oh my!"
Of the truth stay shy,
Idly pass it by,
Not be a better guy!.

I migh further inquire
Does a lie make a liar!?
Or the liar make the lie!?
Which would stand the fire
When the heat is high!?
Is it the desire
Or the deed you to it tie!?

?A!.K!. Jungers!. May 30!. 2008!. All rights reserved!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Interesting poetic form!. The questions lead the reader to reflect upon the impact of lying!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice playing with words!. Ok!.!.!.
Some sentences do not seem to flow quite easily for me, like the last one for example!. Would you consider rephrasing!?
I think the piece is really nice anyway!.
Peace!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

WOW!!! I try to write but I am not good!.!.!.but wow, you are amazing, I really like this poem!!! Hope you put more on here I would so love to read more!!!

southern chickWww@QuestionHome@Com