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Question: Won't you read my five minute sonnet and comment!?
In sweet spring days when all the world is new
And life is circled 'round with love and light,
And golden gifts are clad in morning dew,
Then Fancy soars and wheels in each delight!.
But in the harsh glare of the midday sun
We come to know the cracks that have adorned
Those selfsame wonders, and we sigh as one --
The gifts we held so dear grow to be scorned!.
Alas, at eventide, when dusk descends,
We see anew a fine patina's glow,
And learn at last the secret that depends
On subtle shadows fading lights bestow!.
And yet, to see life's wonders in each time
Is to have lived, and loved, what is sublime!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Your poetry shows great talent!. If you wish to follow sonnet form, I would divide the stanzas accordingly!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow, brilliant!. I particularly like line 4 "Then Fancy soars and wheels in each delight"!. Great!. I admire your ability to write sonnets like this in just 5 minutes! and I'm really ashamed of myself!.
thank you again!.
with best regards,
Lulleh
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Yes, I think very good; the world always changeing!. Sometimes you see it has changed for the worse, but you keep searching, somewhere the beauty of it all is still there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I like it!
What do you think of my other poem!?
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It's wonderful :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Nice, deep and thought provoking!. Very good climax!.!.
PeaceWww@QuestionHome@Com
We antiques like our patinas, we do!.
This is a lovely sonnet to start the day!.
Your last two lines sing!Www@QuestionHome@Com