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Question: I wrote this poem and i was wondering!.!.!.!.!.
Okie so i totally wrote this poem and i was wondering is someone could tell me wut they get from it!?!? And plz be truthful !.!.!.!. thanxz you


-RED PAIN-
The swing goes back and forth
Swinging in the dark
The air is empty
Theres nothing
The sky is full of stars
The moon lights the way
All the pain is there on the ground
To be left
All alone
To be forgotten
The swing goes back and forth
Swinging in the dark
The moon lights the way
All the pain is there on the ground
To be left
Its so red
Red like on the palms of my hands
So red
So wet
The swing goes back and forth
Swinging in the dark
The moon lights the way
All the pain is on the ground to be left
Just like you
Your there
On the ground
You have red all around you
Looking at the red on my hands
I feel all the pain
The pain that only the moonlight can see
I feel the pain
And tears the fall
Like a rainy day…!.
And left there to be forgotten!


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Holy crap! They killed the other person!!! I deff deff did not see that coming!. Lol!.

You write amazingly!.

=D

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