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You can’t repair the hole, The one you left In my sole, Walked all over By all size eights, This has certain traits It is not part of a pair, it’s just not fair Black and muddy, more warmer inside This is where its five friends, once reside Old and discarded, soon to be replaced By a better model, with love inter-laced It is not that of what I fear, it is another year Left!. Alone Without my right Let me know what you think!? Thanks In Advance :-PWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I am very impressed with this poem!. It shows what is really on your mind and what your thoughts are!. I really loved this poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i love it, im a writer to so i know how you feel, i write 24/7 don't let people get you down!. If they do just brush them off they don't mean anything, unless they are really close to you!. Need help/advice you can email me, Heysahara12@yahoo!.com Www@QuestionHome@Com I thought it was good!.keep it up, anyways my favorite part is You can’t repair the hole, The one you left http://answers!.yahoo!.com/question/index;!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Very well thought out and disciplined!. I liked it very much!. I particularly liked the use of 'sole' leaving the reader thinking 'soul'!.Yes I liked it!. Gonna give it a star Www@QuestionHome@Com Its great! I go to www!.testriffic!.com and you can write stories, poems, jokes and even submit art!.Its a great site and if you want feedback its the place to go!Www@QuestionHome@Com loved the metaphorical use of footwear ! enjoyed the poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com it's good, but check grammar and spelling I like how it deep and shows how you're feelingWww@QuestionHome@Com It's okay!.!.!. You have talent, but you still need to polish those rough edges, me cherie,,, Au revoir,,, :)Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it!. (:Www@QuestionHome@Com |