This is absolutely my first try at a song!. I've been into poetry for a long while, but could never write a song!. I asked for some tips yesterday and got a very good response from "grannyjill"
Honestly, I'd like to know what you think!. Any title ideas!? Constructive criticism is welcomed!! Please and thank you (:
feeling free,
hoping me and you agree,
the tall buildings
watching all our mishaps,
we're just specs on a map!.
you're my fix,
me and you a perfect mix,
a piece of me, me!.
the one thing i think,
you're a tattoo and i'm your ink!.
like some kelp beneath the sand
you still saw me- one small strand
what a baffling choice you've made
but you saw me!.
yeah, you saw me!.
what beauty can you see in a generic face!?
what a baffling choice you made
but you saw me
yeah, you saw me!.
small children
playing by my window
and the cold iced tea
cooling down my fever
through the best and the worst,
i'm all yours!.
through the fog
beyond the heat
you got me, me!.
you pulled me past it all!.
the one thing i think,
you're a tattoo and i'm your ink!.
like some kelp beneath the sand
you still saw me- one small strand!.
what a baffling choice you've made
but you saw me
yeah, you saw me!.
small children
playing by my window
and the cold iced tea
cooling down my fever
through the best and the worst
i'm all yours
through the fog,
beyond the heat
you got me,
you pulled me past it all!.
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