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Question: Is your view of clarity the same!?
Dialogues
As words were fashioned, shaped
they were penned upon the page!.
With passion, with need, with love
the artist spoke, spoke with heart!.
But once released, words spoke again
spoke to others, but not the same!.
Critics arose as others praised
the artist, frustrated, walked away!.
Upon this tale, so often told
we ponder and add dialogue!.
We who release words from pens
know that clarity has many parts!.
So from this let us take heart…
would not we rather have comment,
than empty pages, empty words!?
We pen, we proffer, we view…
our hearts!.
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I love it, and it's so true!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
A prose by any other name!.!.!.!.!.
by Anon (lol)
G'day!
Jellz here,
that’s me!.
Frustrated poet,
that’s me too!.
I have many names,
many voices,
all calling out
from the page!.
Can you hear them!?
Do you understand!?
Like or not!?
That’s all I ask!.
Perfection!?
No, that’s not
my name!.
Human!?
Yes!.
Writer, yes!.
Sharer!? Yes!.
Changer, reviser!?
Hmm, not sure
those names fit!.
Maverick, oops,
who told you that one!?
Stubborn!. OK! Woa!
That’s too accurate!
Stop now!.
(Hey, are ALL of these
in the Book of Life!?)
And your name
would be…!.!?
"Helpful!. Constructive!."
Hmm!. OK let’s talk!.
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Your poetry illustrates the beauty and mystery of art!. That is why so many artists, musicians, poets, fiction writers became famous after their death and after having lived and died in poverty!. It will be ever thus!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Really nice poem Neonman!. It`s very true and a good reminder for us all!
Thanks for taking your time to share it with us!.
Have a good weekend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I appreciate every critique I have been given!. They have helped me grow and improve my poetry!. Well said Neon!. and thanks!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I am somehow reminded of Omar Khayyam!.!.!.(whom I dearly love)
"The moving finger writes!.!.!."
We pen as we must, and you've written a winner!Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Hi!",
I agree!.
WELL DONE!
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