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Question: Ok, you all inspired me to write a poem!. I wrote it today about my life growing up
I grew up in total shame!.
All I had was, my parents to blame!.
Torn children with no direction
The perfect brew for imperfection!.
The shameful life I had to live
Unforgiving world, to a white trash kid!.
No one can see through my eyes
The pain that boils in this heart of mine!.
Never understood, never taught
The real meaning of love was never a thought!.
Kicked to the curb, like unwanted plague
Nothing to give to a white trash kid!.
Can’t run from hunger, can’t hide from thirst!.
Life with no foundation, Life at it’s worst!.
Now that I’m older with kids of my own,
What do I do, to change what is sown!.
A child doesn’t deserve a meaningless life!.
Love can be shared, lives can be bright!.
Love with your heart and all you can spare!.
Give with no thought, what returns will be there!.
You can make fun as you always did!.
But, you can’t kill the spirit of this white trash kid!.
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That is a beautiful poem you wrote
it talks about the different emotions
you went through in life!.
Judging by the first few lines
You were abandoned by your parents
Struggles because there was no escape,
there was no direction
to help you to understand things like love!.
You have kids of your own
show them the love you didn't have when
you were younger!.
In other words set an example
be there when they need you!.
Love is:
Love is about sharing
as well as to care
Love is teaching right from wrong
Love is about feeling like you belong
Its also about having happiness
Teaching about forgiveness
Love is about showing it
so another person knows what its about!.
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|Okay, there was no question!. That is a good poem!. And I think it's really gutsy to put it out there like this!. One of the goals in life seems to be to make things better, for ourselves, for our kids!. Sounds like you're working on it!. Good luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I can totally and completely relate to this poem it pretty well describes my life as a kid also!. The one difference is that all I had was my dad!. Beautifully written what a great job
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love it!. you have been through a lot and when you write about it it shows!. good luck and keep it upWww@QuestionHome@Com
I love it! It truly is marvelous! Great job! Great job! (:Www@QuestionHome@Com
great poem - very direct & touching & ends with an uplifting spirit!.
write more !.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com