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Question: I wrote this poem is it good
Ah! my love i cant stand to see
you get taken away from me
if i was a bird i would fly to you and
seek your love,
but i am a bird with clipped wings all
i can do is sit in my cage and watch
you get taken away,
if i could i would fly to your heart
and make that my home,
but i am a bird with clipped wings
who can not fly and seek your
love,
so i must sit in my cage and watch
you get taken away from me


okk hope you liked it i waz kinda
depressed when i wrote it lol so hope you liked itWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
love!.!.!.!.
ha same feeling i have now!.
i really like it!!
it`s very interestingWww@QuestionHome@Com

I see you are depressed
and it is stressful
Not being able to see your girlfriend
Your wanting to fly with her
is an indication of your lonliness
which is breaking your heart!.
If you could be with her
this would make your world happy
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Its okay everyone gets depressed once in a while even me!. But I love your your poem, its very captivating and interesting!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

yeah dude it's sweet!. would be sick in a song or something mate!Www@QuestionHome@Com