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Question: A poem of sun!.!.!? Like it!?
The sun is yet to rise
another day filled to comprimise
I turn it inside out, flip it upside down
so you can see
all the thoughts that drift over me

Now that the sun is brightly beaming
The birds in the park still cheeping
But still i feel of such regret
I long for the day that we first met

The ocean is still crying
People are still fighting
But to you everything is right
Your blinded by her sight

Now the clouds are filling in
and all the secrets are kept
i ask forgivness for my sin
but its too late, the sun has setWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's very descriptive!. I enjoyed
reading it!.

However, each day brings us a
chance to do better!. The sun
doesn't set on not making the
same mistake, reaching higher!.

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very nice
u got some talent
goin to be a writer someday!?Www@QuestionHome@Com