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Position:Home>Poetry> Is this more than just words?Question: Is this more than just words!? Take Me With You I go for peace Yet come home in Pieces broken Torn Worn down But not in the ground I face the faces I get the look You’re off the hook Look what they took From us all Heaven you go This hell All I know As I try to find a way To make it go away ?rad080108Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Have a star from a vet!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This needs to be in every VA facility and the Oval office; and in the offices of all the heads of state in the world!. Thank you, H!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is a tristful but very appreciative look at those men and women who fight overseas for their country, for all of us!. Very powerful perspective!. I especially love the first stanza with its play on words!.!.!.very effective!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com i like it it sounds like someone is presenting there feelings in a poem so they dont directly tell someone and feel stupid about whatever the answer or question!.Www@QuestionHome@Com As Ever your Words are so meaningful!. Somehow you have the nack of making me very very sad!. I Guess that's real Poetry for you!Www@QuestionHome@Com noWww@QuestionHome@Com i like itWww@QuestionHome@Com this is a really good piece, i like it, and its not just wordsWww@QuestionHome@Com Accept what is if one can't change it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |