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Question: How do you apologise for any inconvenience!?
Principles of Thermodynamics:
!. !. Human, Urban, and Stellar
(--for chem tutor, a!.k!.a!., An Honest Man)

There is a hill upon a hill; streams there meet,
And these, of sand, whose confluence of earth
Ascends by weight of falling sweat, tame the heat,
Conducted like a crab quite in reverse!.
I too ascended on this rill!. Here the verse
Of earth on earth grows shrill from throbbing feet
Mysteriously magnified; songs of mirth
Rise there, as bustling visions in the street!.
The music dims my eyes with cooling tears;
Each in the valley frore, as flame appears,
And wells around, and as a lid, encloses
The drear echoing which softly disappears!.
A vision bright as tears was torn from Moses,
And this sight, all the salt of years opposes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is very good!. I am not fond of "streams there meet" and would prefer the more natural "streams meet there"!. Excellent work!
Keep writing!
T!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

no apologies needed for this!.!.!.well written!. " Music dims my eyes with cooling tears" has been committed to my memory bank!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I find I hear a hollow memory of an echo from a stone hall under your hill!. Ancient in origin!. Strange!. Good work!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

"I apologize for any inconvenience!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is a very good poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com