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Question: Did you change your ribbon!?
Ribbons of Rainbows!.

She took one look at the ribbon laid our for her!.
Scorned it!. Created her own!. Brightly strewn with stars and moons!.

No dull gray, uninteresting, staid lines did she favor!.
Colors beyond the pale!.!.!.beckoning!.
That's my journey, she thought!.

It may seem a bit unconventional!.!.!.
But then, so shall I be!.
(And she was!.)Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow - BL - this is is A MUST for some-one's anthology (TD are you listening)

It is perfect (well except for 'our' -first line, but I'm sure you noticed that)

No honestly, this is the first time I've seen a poem like this from you!.!.!.and now I have, I want more!. Pretty please!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Fancy fun this is!!
I have many different colored scrunchies to go with my many different colored shirts!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Excellently done!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This lifts the day, great stuff!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

what pretty visuals with this!.!.!.thank youWww@QuestionHome@Com

I love it!Www@QuestionHome@Com