Iano shows how it's done?

Question: Iano shows how it's done!?

As I've been immortalised several times, I thought I'd return the favour!. Merely to demonstrate how it should be done, of course!.

LONELY BOY

He sits alone, this lonely boy,
amid the shadows of his room!.
He's never known the 'kiss' of joy
to brighten up the pall of gloom!.

He has no friends to call his own,
he seldom ventures past the door!.
And so he sits, apart, alone -
dissatisfied, he yearns for more!.

Forgotten is his given name,
a pseudonym he uses now!.
Computer poems is his game,
at his own alter he does bow!.

"I'll show them all I am the best",
he tells himself, deluded fool!.
He's never passed a written test
and failed all his exams at school!.

Each verse is riddled with mistakes,
he always falls far from the mark!.
"But hey", he says, "them's are the breaks",
and that's why he's still in the dark!.

He sits alone, this lonely boy,
he's really nowhere else to go!.
A simple laptop for a toy -
so pity him!.!.!.poor hydropro!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

Andy is one of the hardest people to annoy!. This demonstrates a rare talent!. The poem also, amid (or is it amongst) the anger and frustration, reflects skill and ability!. It is easy to read BECAUSE (everyone) the meter is correct!.

Now, onto the subject; artistic bent!. I have reviewed all 9 of your posted questions!. They are all combative and belligerent!. You call people out then badger them!. You have posted 2 poems, both well written exercises with ZERO artistic value (well, the other one is close)!.

You have mentioned thrice now how much you dislike my work!. Let me, Sir, slap you across the gob with the gauntlet of poetic challenge!.

Take twenty paces, turn and fire!. I want to see a sonnet, a verse libre' and a Hai'ku in English!. You may do them in any order!. Dondi and Neonman will act as my seconds!.

Ready!.!.!.GO!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Iano this is not fair, You really are getting too
personal now!
Why not Leave it before it goes too far!.You are as I said a clever chap,Don't force me to
Take words back!
Please my dear,Take a bow,
Let another take the curtain now!.

You have nothing else to say or prove,
So on this note,let things snooze!
All this fighting I can't stand,Iano,
I Beg you Please my friend!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It`s such a shame that such a talent as yours will go to waste!. No matter how hard you try nobody will like you!. You gave a terrible first impression!. That will be hard to fix!. This is how you will always be treated!.-
I would love to know what you are trying to prove by hiding behind another avatar!.!? It`s not your poems that we hate,
It`s you that we hate!. So why didn`t you try to get these people to like you from the beginning Is a mystery to me!. At this point It`s really not one that we care to solve!. You act the way you act because that Is the kind of person you are!. Take responsibility for your actions and stop blaming everyone else!.
I agree with TD!. Andy Is one of the nicest human beings that I have the pleasure to know!. He`s also the hardest person to annoy!. For you to have done that then he has your number!.
And by the way, he`s already taken by a lovely woman!. So go find a boyfriend somewhere else!.
And what`s with this hospital crap that you are telling us!. Are you trying to say that you are human!? Let me tell you something!. I have had 3 major surgeries since Oct 07!. But that doesn`t give me the right to feel sorry for myself and to throw a pity party,or to treat people the way you do!.
If your hospital visit was so irrelevant and nobody`s business,
then why did you feel you needed to share this with everyone!?
Did you say you have a brain tumor!?That might explain your actions!.
YAWN!!!You are so boring!.
Why do you put a spin on everything!? I told you, Andy Is not gay so I guess that makes you shi- out of luck!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Unfortunately, uh!.!.!.!.that's not how it's done!. Lano, you still have too many unneccessary(sic) words!.!.!.!.edit it to its bones and the meaning will remain the same!.

Please do not 'bait' poets!.!.!.you could have so many friends here!Www@QuestionHome@Com

sits back and watches the anticipation rise
"oh!" I say to my self with much surprise "I think there is gonna be a fight"
I have to smile when I see all these going-ons! but hey it looks like it could be fun!
so let the poetry challenge begin!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like Iano's a lonely little!.!.!.!.!. LOSER

Awww!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. What's the matter LOSER!?!?

The LOSER posted something moronic & the

LOSER got my answer The poor little lonely

LOSER does not like my answer!.!.!. Awwww!.!.!.!.

I have no pity for the !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.LOSERWww@QuestionHome@Com

Sitting quietly at the sidelines, this ought to be interesting!.
Perhaps I'll take the popcorn concession!.

With talent present,
Why does one ignore his gift!?
It ought to be shared!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Women enjoy watching men at sport--especially in the classical manner!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I suppose I'm too late for all the fun, am available for first aide, know how to suture!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ladies do not take part in duels!. They are far too civilized!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Fifth stanza stumbles a little off-rhythm on my natural reading, but otherwise it's a very workmanlike piece with a clear aim/victim!. Form executed; purpose achieved; no metaphoric fireworks!.

Nice job, but the plan is (I think) a little too easy for you!. My nine year old can write passably in iambic tetrameter--but wait, you might be using that very simplicity as the poison on your dart, 'dumbing it down' to your victim's level !. !. !. hmmm!. !. !. never mind!Www@QuestionHome@Com

The world out there is full of joy
so express it , you stupid boy
No more speak of death and gloom
but of small kids and toy balloons

The joyous moment of loves first kiss
The office party where you got pissed
and screwed the bosses wife right there
beneath the bosses astonished stare

The jovial Police man on the desk
Presiding over your arrest!.!.
And those jolly prisoners three
Introducing you to buggery!.

So write only of happy things
Small children playing on the swings
but maybe you should think awhile
lest they think your a PaedophileWww@QuestionHome@Com