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Question: What do you think of my Free Verse Poem!?
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(Land of the free, Bound in chains)!.
Poem By: Tia Metcher!.
Bold eagle,
Feathered wings,
Out stretched,
Courageously flies,
Gazing down on,
Crimson, Cream
Intermingled,
On Golden,
Green,
Glacious kiss,
Sweet,
Cyries cliffs,
Beneath blue moon hue,
Poised upon its Perch,
Bold eagle sits,
Watching,
Eyes peer,
The Northern Skies,
For preys,
That it may find,
Rich land,
Infused,
By magma,
Lay waste upon,
Bowling Green,
Fearless bird of flight,
Once freed,
Now bound,
By chains,
It cries,
Thorns pierce,
It's feathered,
Wings,
Humbly denied,
Through,
Political,
eyes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Is this a reference to the USA's crest, the bald eagle!?
If so, I get the metaphor!.
If not I think it could be a good comment on animals being hunted or the environment!. I couldn't read it without feeling sympathy!. It really makes you feel something!.
I suggest the title: "The Eagle's Flight"
You could also try: "The Freed Eagle"Www@QuestionHome@Com
It makes a statement about
the plight of eagles!. Yet, it
could be the struggle of some
people!.
The freedom that's lost
forever!.
It stirred my emotions!.
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As an elder American, I picked up on your poem at once,
I do believe it is an excellent Eagle eye view Kudos!.
The choice at the time in history, was almost a turkey!
Seems dark humor to me now!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is very good!. Your rhythm is near perfect!. I am a big fan for Free Form!. This is a good one, a solid list of descriptive phrases!. Very nice!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
great poem, at a very appropriate time in our history!. i read it through 3 times and liked it more with each time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com