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Question: My poem "Bitten", is it any good!?
The air grew thin the black night grew darker
A cool breath consumed my flesh
A desire came over me like none I've even known
I felt a presence behind me
His teeth sunk into my flesh with desirable pain
I didn't cry out nor did I refuse him
I gave into his need
For the warmth that ran inside of my veins
I felt drained with passion and desire
Weakness pulled me to my knees
He gazed at me with his deep darkened eyes
Paralyzing my soul with his passion
I could feel him growing inside of me
Claiming me for his own
My body yearns for his touch
I craved his blood stained lips
Rising to my feet as he slips into the darkness
Leaving behind a message transparent in my mind
A promise of a soon return
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Dude there is no way to explain what I just read!.!.!.
That poem was striking!
It left me speechless :]
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O!.M!.G!!! these is really deep!. You can keep reading it again ans again!. also write poems but for sure not as good as yours!!
Congratulations, it left me speechless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Ooh, I like it! Vampires are something i can relate to!.!.!.


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but I really like it!. I'd give it a 4/5 stars!. It puts a good image in my mind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh my gosh thats amazing!!! You sure have a lot of talent!

Keep rockin it

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